Very creative butterfly! I like how you made the comparison of color pencil being more dull than marker. I like how you showed what Terezin looks like from an aerial view, this intrested me because of the shape (it looks like two stars overlapping). The only recommendations I have is putting the poem so I can see where your ideas are coming from and I also found that the green tag on the left butterfly is empty. Otherwise I was really intrested in your butterfly, great job.
Hey Joesph. Really nice butterfly. I like how you used a variety of colors for the left side to symbolize the past or what the author of your poem enjoyed. The right side was dull colors which I also liked. I did the same for my butterfly. I also liked the night sky and the picture of the Terezin camp. One thing though. Maybe you could elaborate or expand on the authors past because that really affects the way they would live in the camp. Overall, great job on everything.
Hi Joseph. I could definetly tell it took you a lot of hardwork to complete your butterfly, especially with colored pencil. I like the comparison you made between the marker and pencil, because it made a lot of sense. The right wing looked very joyful and bright by using the marker, and the left wing was very dull and didn't stick out so much. Like James, I like how you showed the camp from a birdseye view, and it does look like the Star of David is overlapped.
I thought that this was really good and that you put time into it and thought about what you where writing. I liked the clock in the midsection of the butterfly because it shows the time that it took for the Jews to get free. One thing that you could have done was Create the Star of David which looks like a pentagram on the butterfly wing which could have looked really nice, overall I thought the butterfly was well put together.
I could tell that you put effort in you butterfly as your butterfly is hand drawn which could be time consuming. One of the problem with your butterfly is that you do not have enough Thinglinks as you are suppose to have 14, but you have 11 Thinglinks. Your Thinglinks are descriptive and intersting, but could be improved by adding more detail.
You did a good job on visualizing the poem drawing it on the butterflies. The two things that you need to work on is adding the poem to the blog and adding three tags to your thinglink.
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ReplyDeleteVery creative butterfly! I like how you made the comparison of color pencil being more dull than marker. I like how you showed what Terezin looks like from an aerial view, this intrested me because of the shape (it looks like two stars overlapping). The only recommendations I have is putting the poem so I can see where your ideas are coming from and I also found that the green tag on the left butterfly is empty. Otherwise I was really intrested in your butterfly, great job.
ReplyDeleteHey Joesph. Really nice butterfly. I like how you used a variety of colors for the left side to symbolize the past or what the author of your poem enjoyed. The right side was dull colors which I also liked. I did the same for my butterfly. I also liked the night sky and the picture of the Terezin camp. One thing though. Maybe you could elaborate or expand on the authors past because that really affects the way they would live in the camp. Overall, great job on everything.
ReplyDeleteHi Joseph. I could definetly tell it took you a lot of hardwork to complete your butterfly, especially with colored pencil. I like the comparison you made between the marker and pencil, because it made a lot of sense. The right wing looked very joyful and bright by using the marker, and the left wing was very dull and didn't stick out so much. Like James, I like how you showed the camp from a birdseye view, and it does look like the Star of David is overlapped.
ReplyDeleteI thought that this was really good and that you put time into it and thought about what you where writing. I liked the clock in the midsection of the butterfly because it shows the time that it took for the Jews to get free. One thing that you could have done was Create the Star of David which looks like a pentagram on the butterfly wing which could have looked really nice, overall I thought the butterfly was well put together.
ReplyDeleteI could tell that you put effort in you butterfly as your butterfly is hand drawn which could be time consuming. One of the problem with your butterfly is that you do not have enough Thinglinks as you are suppose to have 14, but you have 11 Thinglinks. Your Thinglinks are descriptive and intersting, but could be improved by adding more detail.
ReplyDeleteYou did a good job on visualizing the poem drawing it on the butterflies. The two things that you need to work on is adding the poem to the blog and adding three tags to your thinglink.
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