Write a short poem elaborating why dreams or visions are an important part of life.
Dreams are what make you strive,
they can even keep you alive.
Dreams are the coach in your game of life,
they can even lead to get a husband/wife.
You might think dream aren't great,
but they can decide your fate.
Dreams are what make a person successful,
although at times they might be stressful.
Visions are like dreams, very swell
and they'll make you tell,
about your great success,
so you can impress.
Make sure you have a dream in mind
and it's okay to have two combined,
but be sure to be kind.
On your voyage won't know what you could find,
but you might even help mankind.
Great poem! I really liked you added the rhyme to it. Great job!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, I loved how you added a photo to your poem and the rhyme scheme was well done.
ReplyDeleteNice Poem! I really liked the rhyme scheme and how you were kind of telling the pros and cons of dreams. I also really liked your picture because I think it ties in nicely with your poe. Overall great job!
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