Heat
Michael Ellie
I hope to meet him
in person one day.
I see him everyday
of my life.
I pitch exactly
like him.
I see people copy and
look up to him.
We love El Grande.
I listen to their every
game on the radio.
I go to all of
their games.
We love the Yankees.
I think she's beautiful.
I didn't tell him
about my family
We kept secrets from each other.
I live in a poor family.
It's hard for me to
make actual friends.
We struggle.
I'm on an all-star team.
My father plays this
for a living.
We love baseball.
After reading your poem I see how the two character interact with each other. I also see how baseball in your life helped you write this poem because you could tell that you have knowledge about the sport.
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